¶ -- You should have started a new paragraph here.
SP -- Designated word is misspelled.
REF -- You should have given a reference here.
# -- An extra space should have been inserted here.
= -- The letter under which this symbol occurs should have been capitalized.
/ -- The letter through which this line is drawn should not have been capitalized.
-- The indicated material
Key to Numbered Comments:
#1. The main point of the paper is not stated crisply and with precision in your introduction.
#2. You have not indicated clearly enough in your introduction just how you will go about accomplishing what you want to accomplish in the paper.
#3. Don't make sweeping generalizations.
#4. The indicated material is stated too vaguely or imprecisely.
#5. The indicated claim requires further explanation.
#6. Find a more appropriate word or phrase.
#7. The indicated material is stated inelegantly.
#8. This is a "run-on" sentence that is out of control and should have been re-written.
#9. The crossed out word or phrase is unnecessary.
#10. The indicated word or expression is misused.
#11. Don't change tenses abruptly.
#12. Your pronoun does not match its antecedent in grammatical number.
#13. Your verb does not match its subject in grammatical number.
#14. The indicated phrase is a dangler, i.e., not appropriately connected to its intended referent.
#15. You have not provided enough context to make the indicated quote fully intelligible.
#16. Incorrect punctuation.#17. Avoid colloquialisms.
#18. Please proofread your paper more carefully.